sun – haiku
sprouts of light blossom
under dawn’s slumberous lids –
new day, new meanings
© Liliana Negoi
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 5 – February 5th – Theme: ‘Ur’ Choice – Form: Acrostic Haiku
Posted by Author on February 4, 2012 · 15 Comments
sprouts of light blossom
under dawn’s slumberous lids –
new day, new meanings
© Liliana Negoi
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uplifting words on sun, well done.
this is beautiful…a feeling of hope..expectation
Beautiful! I wrote about the sun too, but with a different take.
Yeah, I do like the thought – under dawn’s slumberous lids.
Lovely, dawn is my favourite time of day!
Wow! I love the image … I am looking forward to see the warm sun of spring. Nicely done.
I’m in love with this!!!! 🙂
“sprouts of light”
I can see them emerging from the darkness!
Not Acrostic, but My Choice!
I like the new day and new beginnings ~
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2012/02/twins.html
“under dawn’s slumberous lids” — what an image of delight!
Thank you for sharing ~~ Happy Day!
a new day has a new meaning.. Loved it… Superb Lilly.
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My very favorite dawn haiku EVER! Lili, thank you, blessed poetess!
oh, my, glad to see you get into haiku game, I know it is very rewarding, because writing haiku takes talent.
Happy Birthday to you,
hope all is well, if you could share a piece of your haiku with us today, that would be honorable to us.
best, keep up the excellence.
I know your birthday is 10th, hope that you enjoy a lovely day then.
smiles.
THANK YOU JI!!! you made my day today 🙂