white – haiku&pi-ku

gazing at the sky –
snow keeps falling and falling,
covering the land –

winter lays
white
over my thoughts

© Liliana Negoi

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12 Responses to “white – haiku&pi-ku”
  1. Grace says:

    Very nice…I like the piku ~

  2. Lovely…I like “winter lays white over my thoughts”

  3. Andy Sewina says:

    Good thinking! we had a bit of snow in Manchester this weekend too!

  4. cloakedmonk says:

    Sometimes that layer of white feels like it suffocates my thoughts! #tiredofsnow

  5. becca givens says:

    I think I really like this form of Haiku with PiKu … everyone has such interesting developments. Very nice, Lily … but all the snow and winter about makes me feel cold — brr :D!!

  6. Amber says:

    Ah! Pi-ku is gooood! 🙂

  7. Good one. Love the pi-ku.

  8. granbee says:

    Winter snow DOES whiten our thought, doesn’t it? Had not thought of it exactly that way before. Thank you so much for this fresh insight!

  9. Brindle says:

    nice thoughts expressed here…awesome…:)

  10. ‘Over my thoughts’.. I loved your Pi-Ku so much 🙂

    Someone is Special

  11. Lovely and delicate…..beautiful thoughts

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