autumn end – haiku

november dying –
what sweet bitterness sheltered
by sunlight’s flavor!

© Liliana Negoi

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions
9 Responses to “autumn end – haiku”
  1. that’s a different take on the theme.. Loved it so much Liliana..

    Someone is Special

  2. becca givens says:

    Autumn is my favorite time of year …

  3. Such sadness when autumn slips into winter. I am a autumn-guy I love autumn and I am always sad when it departs. Nice one.

  4. Amber says:

    i LIKE this!!! 🙂

  5. John Jackson says:

    Love it! Clever twist in the last line.

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