sun – haiku

sprouts of light blossom
under dawn’s slumberous lids –
new day, new meanings

© Liliana Negoi

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15 Responses to “sun – haiku”
  1. uplifting words on sun, well done.

  2. this is beautiful…a feeling of hope..expectation

  3. Asni says:

    Beautiful! I wrote about the sun too, but with a different take.

  4. Andy Sewina says:

    Yeah, I do like the thought – under dawn’s slumberous lids.

  5. Karen says:

    Lovely, dawn is my favourite time of day!

  6. Wow! I love the image … I am looking forward to see the warm sun of spring. Nicely done.

  7. Amber says:

    I’m in love with this!!!! 🙂

  8. “sprouts of light”

    I can see them emerging from the darkness!

    Not Acrostic, but My Choice!

  9. becca givens says:

    “under dawn’s slumberous lids” — what an image of delight!
    Thank you for sharing ~~ Happy Day!

  10. a new day has a new meaning.. Loved it… Superb Lilly.

    Someone is Special

  11. granbee says:

    My very favorite dawn haiku EVER! Lili, thank you, blessed poetess!

  12. oh, my, glad to see you get into haiku game, I know it is very rewarding, because writing haiku takes talent.

    Happy Birthday to you,

    hope all is well, if you could share a piece of your haiku with us today, that would be honorable to us.

    best, keep up the excellence.

  13. I know your birthday is 10th, hope that you enjoy a lovely day then.

    smiles.

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