rhythm – haiku

ankle bracelet chimes
betraying the impatience –
feet feel the music

© Liliana Negoi

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image…Photo Clicked by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography

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8 Responses to “rhythm – haiku”
  1. granbee says:

    The feet ARE the first part of the body to absorb the music. At least, that is true of me. Very good haiku to express that quirk!

  2. Mama Zen says:

    I really like this one! That second line is marvelous.

  3. Ellecee says:

    “feet feel the music” I like that. Very nice Haiku

  4. Pete Armetta says:

    Cute! Creates a lovely picture.

    Pete

  5. becca givens says:

    Delightful image portrayed ~~ seems everyone is shining with this prompt!
    Here is my Day 22.

  6. ‘feel the music!’… SmileS..

  7. yelena says:

    a haiku filled to the brim with dance and light. i can almost hear that rhythm 🙂

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