prayer – for Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally Week 31 (October 21-27)
ripped off the morning’s body,
lay, inert, across the numb hills,
waiting to be picked by pixies
and braided into soft laces…
my thought is running,
chasing the dreams of the night,
searching among evaporating drops of dew
and shameless sun rays
for the oasis of your soul…
and as day and night melt together
in a silvery whirl of wishes,
all i keep praying for
is a way to make the sand waves
take me faster to my lover…
© Liliana Negoi
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best wishes.
prayers lead you fly to your lover,
how clever,
love your sentiments here.
Great visuals of the breaking dawn.
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/10/11/sexy/
Happy Rally.
🙂
beautiful!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/09/26/living-in-the-shadows-of-blackness/
I love to watch the fog when its low. I like to watch it shrink away as the sun comes up…it reminds me of coming out of a dream …from floating on cloud and landing back on the ground. Great thoughts and scenes but it just doesn’t seem magical or anything else when your missing someone does it? That is kind of what it was like when I would drive a big truck and see the whole country.
Nice prayer..hope you reach your lover soon
You are an wonderful poet.. I am inspired by your works.. Loved your thoughts..
An Ode to Friendship
Happy Rally
–Someone Is Special–
ah that is beautiful. I think the imagery is truly beautiful. It is my kind of poem. 🙂 Love it.
A great write! Love the flow of your words.
“Take me faster to my lover”
A wish most people seem to have if not all:)
My participation for week 31
http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/the-other-side-of-the-sun/
this is like a passage from those old greek myths. only they always have an ending to mourn for.
i like it =]
-kyogakura
beautiful imagery; the way you paint the dawn is so powerful, and this piece has an understated sensuality that is lovely.
shreds of fog,
ripped off the morning’s body, – a beautiful image!
Beautiful prayer…definitely enjoy your work.