night keeps
biting from my unborn
words, savoring each shadow of
the sounds yet flying
through ether like fragile
butterflies waiting to rest
their wings in the corner
of my mouth…kissing you
would taste now dark
chocolate-like, with just a shade
of pepper, a spicy bitter-sweet
bite granting my dreams
free passage towards tomorrow…
and i miss you…

© Liliana Negoi

5 Responses to “shortcuts”
  1. Jingle says:

    love the opening,

    night keeps biting from your unborn words…
    very divine line.

  2. Jingle says:

    thanks for the support, see you next week…

  3. Giovanni says:

    Your words and rhythm are enchanting…I especially love the image of butterflies as words landing in the corner of the mouth…simply beautiful.

  4. mairmusic says:

    the images in this are so strong and many overlapping– feeling and sight together creating a wonderful richness. beautiful!

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