absolute sinner

forgive me lover for i have sinned,
i tasted all seven deadly sins:
pride – when i dreamed that i deserved such a total love,
greed – when i wanted you just for myself,
wrath – when rebelling against your need for distance,
sloth – when i prayed for my death instead of your life,
envy – when others talk to you and you to them, but i just watch,
gluttony – when reading each word of yours like the holy book,
lust – whenever you’re in my thoughts…
so tell me, lover…
would a lifetime of “i love you”‘s be penitence enough?

© Liliana Negoi

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4 Responses to “absolute sinner”
  1. Olivia says:

    Dear Liliana,
    This one is a beautiful piece.. wow.. very well written.. simple and yet so meaningful.. the 7 deadly sins converted to sinfully poetic trans..!!

    Very Well done.. xox
    Happy Potluck
    http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/sinfully-me/

  2. Ramesh Sood says:

    This is a very beautiful take on Seven Sins.. reading and not appreciating would have been kinda eighth sin.. so here I am ..liked it very much..well done..

  3. Jingle says:

    7 in a row,
    very lovely down pour.
    love it.

  4. fiveloaf says:

    great work liliana..

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